I'm interested in what's the goal of sending this to Burgers'? Is it just to get feedback or do you hope that they will use parts of it? If it's the latter, I can already tell you that if they even read it little to none would be used. Most of it is impractical, not in line with their vision or simply economically impossible.
B.t.w. if you're not completely done yet with all proposed problems, I did found some more in the Congo Dome this time.
- The okapi exhibit is too small without any outdoor exhibits. The drill and pigmy hippo exhibits are also rather small for all-indoor exhibits.
- The okapi exhibit doesn't seem to have room at all for a second exhibit, no separation exhibit almost certainly means no okapi coming from the EEP.
- Mixing okapi with hogs and colobus indoor in such a small place is a horrible idea, loads of aggression and stress for most if not all parties. Once again the EEP-coördinator would never approve of sending okapis into such an exhibit.